RE: Teddies Bare Kush: Just Another Day on Ceres 7
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First sentence: The zombies left the transport, sighing the dome's stale air.
Not reading any more 'till you fix your shit.
Thanks friend. The fact you are the only person who noticed an error in the first damn sentence makes my die of laughter. Shoutout to grocko, reading my shit beyond the first 3 words since the git go. You're a real one. I corrected that sentence, but honestly should've spent time editing. Wait to read it until tomorrow so I actually can look over it after work and not waste your time with silly errors like that one.
Anything for my favorite cryptic reptile.